She knows the shades Beyond pink,
darker than you think.
Let her fly, She has wings.
Restrain her & she’ll sting.
©AnkitaS 2013
Image source :HERE
She knows the shades Beyond pink,
darker than you think.
Let her fly, She has wings.
Restrain her & she’ll sting.
©AnkitaS 2013
Image source :HERE
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nice….its a haiku i reckon….i never succeed in comping up with good poems….i wonder how u guys do it so effortlessly
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Hey Ritzy 🙂 It’s not Haiku since it has four lines. I wrote this one for a Contest on Twitter #BeyondPink and loved it too much so Here it is.
PS– I am not good at poems too. I can never write one if I plan to.
PPS– You always encourage and are a best critique. Thank you 🙂
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Oh, good luck for the contest…
PS- Though i am a good critique for other formats, i keep my comments neutral when it comes to poems….Since i am myself so weak in this genre, i don’t think i have a right to pass judgment 😉
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You have a flare for words, Ankita! Too good! I loved it
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Thank you TSW 🙂
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Nice nice very Nice…even the picture perfectly matches the word…
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A very strong message send across… great creation..
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simple words but they weave a strong message.. very well written 🙂
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awesome rhyming and beautifully written Ankita 🙂 liked the ending line 🙂
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four line with so many messages .. nice .. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Immortal Lines 😍👌
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