Today I introduced myself to my very own Heart,
In silent agony, after all these years it bled apart.
By AnkitaS2010
Poetry type – Couplet.
A couplet is a pair of lines of meter in poetry. It usually consists of two lines that rhyme and have the same meter.
While traditionally couplets rhyme, not all do. A poem may use white space to mark out couplets if they do not rhyme.
The way you said so much in those two lines was so impactful .Loved it totally. 🙂 🙂
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Thanks 🙂 🙂
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Thank you Bandan…
I definitely will checkout your blog as well.
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you said what you needed to say in 2 lines… impressive
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Thank you for stopping by 🙂 😀
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great to know u.
😉
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Gr8 TO knw u 2 Jingle…
🙂 😀
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my favourite saying is less is more..with the aid of the image you captured this so well..cheers Pete
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Cheers!!! 🙂
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Wonderful. This tiny poem packs a powerful emotional punch. Well done!
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I appreciate that you stop by n liked my piece. 🙂
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awesome pic.. and most importantly the lines there have a brilliant impact..
hard hittin…
im here from Jingle’s Rally
you can read my post at…
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/08/12/thursday-poets-rally-frog-prince-revisited/
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Thanks 🙂 🙂
loved your blog as well 😀
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amazing power in just 2 lines. and i LOVE the image that goes with.
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🙂
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Polished. Pointed. Poingnant. Sometime we stuff our feelings … then the day arrives when we have to face up.
Perfect paring of illustration and poem. Good job.
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Thank you… Thank you for describing it so well 🙂
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Your lines are explosive. My fascination of short poems is the power they hold. The topic alone is intriguing. I always assumed that my emotions are my own, that my feelings are just an extension of myself. But they very much belong to the emotions I associate them with. Great Read!
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Thank you so so much for your lovely comment… 🙂 😀
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Those 2 lines revealed the story of a friggin’ lifetime!!
AWESOME!
I am glad they spoke to you, and you to them!They make good companions when no one’s around 🙂
Loved it Anks!!!!
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So true… so true Kavita
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Intense in its brevity and expression. An so true. Also appreciated the picture above the poem. – Bill
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Thanks bill
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fantastic picture and awesome words to follow it.
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Thanks Trisha….
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That was just awesome!!! Thanks for sharing your talentx
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YOU R awesome Amanda 🙂
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this is great.
Two lines is all you needed,
Great job
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Yeah… Two lines were enough… Thanks
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Message understood. Right to the point. Good one. Hope all is well. 🙂
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YUp… All is well…. just understood something about myself so thought of sharing it.
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Very precise and nice. Heartspell
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Thanks heart spell
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http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/15/poetry-awards-4thursday-poets-rally-week-26-plus-more/
two awards on the bottom for you,
the most creative blogger award,
u r a rare friend award….
cheers!
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Glad they did.. beautiful 2 lines..
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thank you for visiting…. 😀
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As usual, the visual and the audio hold hands tight.
Aside that, your new gravatar is remarkable, the natural in there ensures that. A simplicity that produces a spectrum.
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Thank you Monarc…. Thanks for the complement.. 🙂 😀
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Wow, you said a lot in very few words…brilliant!
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Am glad you liked it 🙂
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Picked up your web blog via live search the other day and absolutely think its great. Carry on the truly great work.
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thankQ so much for stopping by and liking it . 🙂
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Cheers!
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