I first wrote this poem in 2010 (Which you can read HERE), my very first Poetic-short-story when I started blogging. Miss Felicia, the expert adviser told me to create a poster of it and voilà! Hope you like it, feedback and comments are always welcome.
Stay Happy and keep smiling 🙂
Nice poem, can I share it?
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Yes you can 😊 Do mention the source Or give credit because it’s copyrighted. Thanks
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Miss Felicia is giving you some good advice. Nice poem poster there.
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I like this. Such a lovely poem, this!
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Thanks Ste, welcome to my blog 🙂
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I LOVED the poem, a bit sad though (maybe i am being too emotional)!
The format is good too – you could have used light background instead for better readability.
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Thanks Alok, yeah the poem is bittersweet, it made me emotional too when I wrote it. Will keep your feedback regarding light background in mind in my next edit 🙂 I guess got too carried away with Pink too 😀
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Hahaha, ladies favorite 😋
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Hehe 😆 Exactly
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Sometimes spelling it out leaves something amiss. 🙂
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Hello Anonymous, I have no idea what you meant but I got a strange feeling by this comment. Please clarify and would love to know your identity 🙂 Do visit back soon.
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very creative and very moving and you have a way with words. peace
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I’m still smiling 🙂 It is your positive imagination that gives such an ending. Beautifully written.
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The English Fortnight Magazine Shourya is welcoming new voices of writing. Those who’re interested can send your stories, poetry or articles to shauryamagazine@gmail.com.
Pls check the online version of the magazine below.
https://www.readwhere.com/read/2372232/Shaurya-The-Proud-Indian-Edition-2-October-15th-2019/
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